Kill the narrator. He talks too much.
You talk too much. (You never shut up.)
Shut up "shuttin' up."
(Good for dialog)
I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP
maybe that;s why dead narrators
tell the best stories?
"...then they kilt me."
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Just relaxing and being yourself
puts you at the head of the pack.
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couple on BART overaccessorized,
semi shaved one-dangly-earring depending
boots and a good color scheme - brick red
but faded, glasses like mine, great
profile, leone-cowboy hairdresser
he, she the good yoko, asian master
of western taste, subtleties, nuance,
stars of their own movies but ultimately
not a story i care to tell (so what?)
